It looks like a titanium box that has ink all over it and greasy slime. In the box there is a pirate ship in a bottle called The Flying Dutchman. The box feels like touching an octopus and a squid. The box smells like wet soggy dirt from thousands of years ago. I can hear big waves splashing in the glass bottle trying to break it.
What we had to do was write a few sentences about a mystery box that we found when we were going digging for stuff. We had to describe what was in the box, what did the box look like, what did it smell like, what did it feel like and what could you hear.
it was a bit hard but my mum helped me with it.
Hi Jacob,
ReplyDeleteYou have used some great words to describe both the box and the pirate ship. Well done! Also, you have written a really good task description so people know what your task was.
Miss West
Miss West
Talofa lava Jacob,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your Mystery box writing, it was very interesting. Keep up the great imaginations and I can't wait to see more of your work.
Take care and stay safe!