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Showing posts with label 2020 room 10 writing year 5 term 1. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2020 room 10 writing year 5 term 1. Show all posts

Friday, 17 April 2020

the mystery box

It looks like a titanium box that has ink all over it and greasy slime. In the box there is a pirate ship in a bottle called The Flying Dutchman. The box feels like touching an octopus and a squid. The box smells like wet soggy dirt from thousands of years ago. I can hear big waves splashing in the glass bottle trying to break it.
What we had to do was write a few sentences about a mystery box that we found when we were going digging for stuff. We had to describe what was in the box, what did the box look like, what did it smell like, what did it feel like and what could you hear.

it was a bit hard but my mum helped me with it.

Friday, 6 March 2020

creative writing

It was freezing cold on Saturday night. Jim and his friend Will had gone out to the shops to see if they had won lotto. When they scanned the ticket and it said go to LA to get $155,000,000 but they didn't know how to get to LA though. They thought of getting an airplane but it cost too much so they had to get a train. Sadly they were late and the train was starting to go to LA. The boy jumped onto the train and was holding on. It was sad because Will didn’t get to jump on.
Jim was in LA after a few hours but the train stopped because a cat was in the middle of the track so he had to get out of the train and get the cat but out of nowhere a train was coming. Jim ran as fast as he could to get back on the train then the train got to the place where he could get the cash. When he got to see the guy that had the money he collected it and instantly bought a truck to put the cash in never to see will again.

Friday, 14 February 2020

Australian bushfire

On january the 5th a massive fire happened in australia. I saw heaps of burning trees and heaps of burnt animals. Suddenly a big BANG happened a tree caught on fire by lightning. Someone texted me saying that a koala was stuck in a burning tree so i had to help it. After 1 day the koala was good because it went to the vet and it was good.